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Actually, when we were young, we had to accept people who are different from us. Because we can learn a lot of things from those people even if they could make some troubles. But when we get older, we already know who is not good for us. And we can avoid them naturally, so we don\'t need to accept different people against our will. Just keep the little distance from them.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
You\'re right about that.
It was indeed easier to accept people when we were young.
_T. SHAY^^
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Actually, when we were young, we had to accept people who are different from us. Because we can learn a lot of things from those people even if they could make some troubles.
Thank you for sharing.
You\'re right about that.
It was indeed easier to accept people when we were young.
_T. SHAY^^
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Actually, when we were young, we had to accept people who are different from us. Because we can learn a lot of things from those people even if they could make some troubles.
>>Actually, when we were young, we had to accept people who were different from us because we could learn a lot from them--even if they sometimes caused troubles.
OR: As children, we had to accept people who were different from us because was always something to learn from them, even if they occasionally caused problems.
But when we get older, we already know who is not good for us.
But when we get older, we already know who is not good for us.
>>But as we get older, we already know who is not good for us.
And we can avoid them naturally, so we don\'t need to accept different people against our will.
And we can avoid them naturally, so we don\'t need to accept different people against our will.
>>Correct
OR: We can choose to avoid certain people, rather than accepting those we\'re uncomfortable with.
OR: We can choose to avoid certain people, rather than accepting those we\'re uncomfortable with.
Just keep the little distance from them.
>>Just keep a little distance from them.
>>Just keep a little distance from them.
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