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2025-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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School can make lessons more that students can choice. School can make the resting area for students. They have to let them know how to study.

강사 첨삭

Hi Julie!
Thank you for your composition.
This is really good practice.
Keep it up.
If you have any questions, just ask in class.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
School can make lessons more that students can choice.
>> Schools can prepare lessons that students chose. 
School can make the resting area for students.
>> Schools can make a resting area for students.
They have to let them know how to study.
>> Correct

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