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2012-05-21 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1)We do not like to go out. 2)Dane does not bake a cake. 3)You are not playing today. 4)Sarah does not live in the Seoul. 5)She does not read novels at school. The exchange rate is continually increasing. The economic crisis of Greece has a bad effect on world economy. I have to exchange into baht for my trip. Fortunately, The baht is a little influenced by that. It is not almost changed. But US dollars that applied on the duty free shop rose by a lot. I have lots things to buy in the duty free shop. Economists said that the rate will become stable on July. But they expected the rate to rise continually until July. I'm worring when I pay on the duty free shop. If I don't buy somethings right now, it will be sold out and the price will rise. But I will miss a chance to accumulate more point. The point is able to accumulate daily. I just figured the price that I pay daily.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], thank you for dropping in your composition, and likewise, for making a good job on answering your homework.. Maybe w can talk about that later on class my dear.. take care always Teacher Cam^^ 1)We do not like to go out. >>Correct2)Dane does not bake a cake. >>Correct3)You are not playing today. >>Correct4)Sarah does not live in the Seoul. >>Correct5)She does not read novels at school.>>CorrectThe exchange rate is continually increasing. >>Correct >>The excjange rate is continuesly increasing.The economic crisis of Greece has a bad effect on world economy. >>CorrectI have to exchange into baht for my trip. >>CorrectFortunately, The baht is a little influenced by that. >>CorrectIt is not almost changed. >>Its not that affected.But US dollars that applied on the duty free shop rose by a lot. >>But US dollars taht applied on the dutyfree rose a lot.I have lots things to buy in the duty free shop. >>CorrectEconomists said that the rate will become stable on July. >>CorrectBut they expected the rate to rise continually until July. >>Correct >>But they are expecting the rate to rise continuesly until July.I\'m worring when I pay on the duty free shop. >>CorrectIf I don\'t buy somethings right now, it will be sold out and the price will rise. >>CorrectBut I will miss a chance to accumulate more point. >>Correct..more points..The point is able to accumulate daily. >>CorrectI just figured the price that I pay daily. >>Correct

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