Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Last Wednesday you gave me a homework.
Do you think greetings affect how the rest of the conversation will go? Why?
- Yes, the greetings affect how the rest of the converstaion will go.
The greetings is a signal that I am ready to have a conversation.
Depending on whether the greetings are warm or rold, the conversation flow can change.
Last Friday I studied with teacher Jhozel and she gave me a homework.
How does you weekend help you recharge for Monday?
- In my case, I get the power for getting through the weekdays for shaking time with love ones.
So I usually spend time with boyfriend, friends and family. I feel comfortable around them. Commonly, I have meals with them or talk all day.
강사 첨삭
Hi Nieves,
Thank you for taking the time to answer these essay questions. 😊
I totally agree with you! Greetings can really set the tone for the rest of the conversation.
And yes, spending time with our loved ones is always the best way to recharge.
Have a great day tomorrow and see you again on Wednesday. Good night! 😊
- Teacher Elly~
Last Wednesday you gave me a homework.
>> Last Wednesday, you gave me homework.
Do you think greetings affect how the rest of the conversation will go? Why?
>> CORRECT
- Yes, the greetings affect how the rest of the converstaion will go.
>> Yes, greetings affect how the rest of the conversation will go.
The greetings is a signal that I am ready to have a conversation.
>>A greeting is a signal that I am ready to have a conversation.
Depending on whether the greetings are warm or rold, the conversation flow can change.
>> Depending on whether the greetings are warm or cold, the flow of the conversation can change.
Last Friday I studied with teacher Jhozel and she gave me a homework.
>> Last Friday, I studied with Teacher Jhozel and she gave me homework.
>> Depending on whether the greetings are warm or cold, the flow of the conversation can change.
Last Friday I studied with teacher Jhozel and she gave me a homework.
>> Last Friday, I studied with Teacher Jhozel and she gave me homework.
How does you weekend help you recharge for Monday?
>> How does your weekend help you recharge for Monday?
- In my case, I get the power for getting through the weekdays for shaking time with love ones.
>> In my case, I get the energy/power to get through the weekdays by spending time with loved ones.
>> How does your weekend help you recharge for Monday?
- In my case, I get the power for getting through the weekdays for shaking time with love ones.
>> In my case, I get the energy/power to get through the weekdays by spending time with loved ones.
So I usually spend time with boyfriend, friends and family. I feel comfortable around them.
>> So I usually spend time with my boyfriend, friends, and family. I feel comfortable around them.
Commonly, I have meals with them or talk all day.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Usually, I have meals with them or spend the whole day talking.
OR >> Usually, I have meals with them or spend the whole day talking.
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