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I asked same question after being close. Some people said they thought I would be quite. Because I was very shy when I haven\'t met everyone in that place. But some people thought I was extroverted. Because when I felt awkward, I pretend to be an active person.
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Hi, Megan^^
I think those are not bad first impressions.
In my case, most people think I\'m cold.
It\'s also because I feel awkward and shy.
_T. SHAY^^
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I asked same question after being close.
>>I ask the same question after getting close to someone.
Some people said they thought I would be quite.
>>Some people said they thought I would be quiet.
Because I was very shy when I haven\'t met everyone in that place.
>>It\'s because I am very shy when there\'s no one I know in a place.
But some people thought I was extroverted. Because when I felt awkward, I pretend to be an active person.
I think those are not bad first impressions.
In my case, most people think I\'m cold.
It\'s also because I feel awkward and shy.
_T. SHAY^^
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I asked same question after being close.
>>I ask the same question after getting close to someone.
Some people said they thought I would be quite.
>>Some people said they thought I would be quiet.
Because I was very shy when I haven\'t met everyone in that place.
>>It\'s because I am very shy when there\'s no one I know in a place.
But some people thought I was extroverted. Because when I felt awkward, I pretend to be an active person.
>>But some people thought I was extroverted because when I feel awkward, I pretend to be outgoing.
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