homework
학생이 쓴 원문
>> Do you recess is important in schools? Give 3 to 5 reasons why it\'s important or not.
If we continue to take classes without a break time, we\'ll experience a lot of stress.
And we will lost our knowledge and concentrate.
Lastly, it is not helpful to studying.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]
And we will lost our knowledge and concentrate.
Lastly, it is not helpful to studying.
Well done! I would like to commend you for following the instruction clearly.
~Teacher Jess
If we continue to take classes without a break time, we\'ll experience a lot of stress.
>> If we continue to take classes without taking a break, we will get stress.
And we will lost our knowledge and concentrate.
>> We might lose our knowledge and might have a hard time to concentrate.
Lastly, it is not helpful to studying.
>> CORRECT
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