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If others hope that I help them, I easily offer help to others. But when they don\'t ask me some help, then I can\'t eaily offer help to them. Because when they refuse my help, I feel shy and embarrased. Especially, I usually try to decide that I help support elderly people I don\'t know. Seeing them reminds me of my grandmother, so I want to help. But I was afraid I might make a mistake and accidentally hurt them, so I didn’t help.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
Helping others can be confusing sometimes because some appreciate it but others don\'t.
_T. SHAY^^
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If others hope that I help them, I easily offer help to others.
>>If others want my help, I\'m always willing to offer it.
But when they don\'t ask me some help, then I can\'t eaily offer help to them.
>>But when they don\'t ask me for help, I can\'t easily offer it to them.
Thank you for sharing.
Helping others can be confusing sometimes because some appreciate it but others don\'t.
_T. SHAY^^
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If others hope that I help them, I easily offer help to others.
>>If others want my help, I\'m always willing to offer it.
But when they don\'t ask me some help, then I can\'t eaily offer help to them.
>>But when they don\'t ask me for help, I can\'t easily offer it to them.
OR: But if they don\'t ask for help, I find it hard to offer it.
Because when they refuse my help, I feel shy and embarrased.
>>It\'s also because when they refuse my help, I feel shy and embarrassed.
Especially, I usually try to decide that I help support elderly people I don\'t know.
>>I usually try to decide whether to help support elderly people I don\'t know.
Seeing them reminds me of my grandmother, so I want to help.
>>Correct
OR: They remind me of my grandmother, so I feel compelled to help.
But I was afraid I might make a mistake and accidentally hurt them, so I didn’t help.
>>But I am afraid I might make a mistake and accidentally hurt them, so I choose not to help.
Because when they refuse my help, I feel shy and embarrased.
>>It\'s also because when they refuse my help, I feel shy and embarrassed.
Especially, I usually try to decide that I help support elderly people I don\'t know.
>>I usually try to decide whether to help support elderly people I don\'t know.
Seeing them reminds me of my grandmother, so I want to help.
>>Correct
OR: They remind me of my grandmother, so I feel compelled to help.
But I was afraid I might make a mistake and accidentally hurt them, so I didn’t help.
>>But I am afraid I might make a mistake and accidentally hurt them, so I choose not to help.
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