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Yes. When I was 20, just entering a university, I was very shy and slient. But one of my seniors had a good first impression about me. She said I was very nervious but it looked cute because I was just a freshman and I reacted well. I think smile and reaction make a good first impression without speaking. And in the work place, working hard without speaking make a even better first impression.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
I agree. It seems like smiling really does the work.
_T. SHAY^^
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Yes. When I was 20, just entering a university, I was very shy and slient.
>>Yes. When I was 20 and had just entered a university, I was very shy and silent.
But one of my seniors had a good first impression about me.
>>But one of my seniors had a good first impression of me.
She said I was very nervious but it looked cute because I was just a freshman and I reacted well.
>>She said I was very nervous, but it looked cute because I was just a freshman and I reacted well.
Thank you for sharing.
I agree. It seems like smiling really does the work.
_T. SHAY^^
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Yes. When I was 20, just entering a university, I was very shy and slient.
>>Yes. When I was 20 and had just entered a university, I was very shy and silent.
But one of my seniors had a good first impression about me.
>>But one of my seniors had a good first impression of me.
She said I was very nervious but it looked cute because I was just a freshman and I reacted well.
>>She said I was very nervous, but it looked cute because I was just a freshman and I reacted well.
OR: She said I seemed very nervous, but it was cute because I was just a freshman and I responded well.
I think smile and reaction make a good first impression without speaking.
>>I think a smile and good reactions make a good first impression, even without speaking.
And in the work place, working hard without speaking make a even better first impression.
>>And in the work place, working hard without speaking makes an even better first impression.
>>I think a smile and good reactions make a good first impression, even without speaking.
And in the work place, working hard without speaking make a even better first impression.
>>And in the work place, working hard without speaking makes an even better first impression.
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