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2025-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Shay

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I don\'t really like advertisements middle of TV programs, but they should be allowed to interrupt TV. Because an advertisement fee is a lot and it maintains programs. So we need to stand that advertisement. The alternative is paying for membership like YouTube premieum or making difference of fee. I pay for Netfilx with advertisement because it is the cheapest one.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
Yes, you\'re right.
The advertisements also have a purpose.
_T. SHAY^^
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I don\'t really like advertisements middle of TV programs, but they should be allowed to interrupt TV.
>>I don\'t really like advertisements in the middle of TV programs, but they should be allowed to interrupt TV.
Because an advertisement fee is a lot and it maintains programs.
>>Because advertising fees are high, they help fund and maintain TV programs.
So we need to stand that advertisement.
>>So we need to put up with those advertisements.
The alternative is paying for membership like YouTube premieum or making difference of fee.
>>The alternative is paying for a membership like YouTube premium or having different fee option.
I pay for Netfilx with advertisement because it is the cheapest one.
>>I pay for Netflix with advertisements because it is the cheapest one.

OR: I subscribe to the Netflix plan with ads because it\'s the most affordable.

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