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2025-07-24 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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Hi, teacher! I\'m sorry for uploading homework late😭 How do you balance enjoying food and staying healthy? Normally, I cook at my home. I try to eat a balance diet with meat and vegetables. Sometimes I eat out about twice a week. I think tasty food makes me happy and fee[이름]g happy is good for health.

강사 첨삭

Hi Nieves,
Thank you for taking the time to answer this question. :)
A balanced diet plays an important role in staying healthy.
Let’s continue taking care of our health. After all, health is wealth!
Thanks again for your time tonight. See you on Friday! :)

- Teacher Elly~

Hi, teacher!

>> CORRECT

I\'m sorry for uploading homework late
>> I\'m sorry for uploading my homework late.

How do you balance enjoying food and staying healthy?
>> CORRECT

Normally, I cook at my home. I try to eat a balance diet with meat and vegetables. Sometimes I eat out about twice a week.
>> Normally, I cook at home. I try to eat a balanced diet with meat and vegetables. I eat out about twice a week.

I think tasty food makes me happy and fee[이름]g happy is good for health.
>> I think tasty food makes me happy, and fee[이름]g happy is good for my health.

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