homework
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HOMEWORK:
What do you usually order in your favorite restaurant?
My favorite food is beef.
My wife dislike beef.. so, I don\'t have opportunity to eat beef. And beef is expensive.
But, we common the favorite food is Sushi. So, we enjoy to order sushi.
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Hi [이름] [이름],
Thank you for taking the time to check my homework. :)
I’m a huge fan of beef too! And of course, sushi! Almost everyone loves it.
See you in class later. :)
Thank you for taking the time to check my homework. :)
I’m a huge fan of beef too! And of course, sushi! Almost everyone loves it.
See you in class later. :)
- Teacher Elly~
My favorite food is beef.
My favorite food is beef.
>> CORRECT
My wife dislike beef.. so, I don\'t have opportunity to eat beef. And beef is expensive.
>> My wife dislikes beef, so I don’t have the opportunity to eat it. Also, beef is expensive.
But, we common the favorite food is Sushi. So, we enjoy to order sushi.
My wife dislike beef.. so, I don\'t have opportunity to eat beef. And beef is expensive.
>> My wife dislikes beef, so I don’t have the opportunity to eat it. Also, beef is expensive.
But, we common the favorite food is Sushi. So, we enjoy to order sushi.
>> But we have a common favorite food: sushi. So we enjoy ordering sushi.
OR >> However, we share the same favorite food — sushi. So we enjoy ordering it.파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.