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A game which i will never play is which has gacha system. It\'s need a lot of money. And its probability is very low.
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A game which I will never play is which has gacha system.
>> A game which I will never play is a game that has a gacha system.
It\'s need a lot of money.
>> It needs a lot of money.
And its probability is very low.
>> CORRECT!
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