Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
[Writing Exercise] How do you express your disappointment to someone?
I feel disappointment that I communicated someone.
If I don\'t talk, I can\'t remove my feelings.
I\'m passive for my emotion. and I don\' like incorrent relation.
Also, If I\'m disappointed in my wife, I\'m going to resolve it on the day.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름] [이름]!
When you\'re disappointed, it\'s critical to accept your emotions, give yourself space to absorb them, and then figure out constructive methods to proceed.
[이름]ing your expectations, getting help, or concentrating on constructive pursuits could all be part of this.
Thank you so much for finding time to answer your homework. I will see you in our next class.^^
Practice English whenever you can!
__Teacher Mayleen :)
I feel disappointment that I communicated someone.
>>> If I feel disappointment, I communicate with that someone.
If I don\'t talk, I can\'t remove my feelings.
>>> If I don\'t talk, I can\'t get rid of my negative feelings.
I\'m passive for my emotion. and I don\' like incorrent relation.
>>> I\'m passive about my emotion. and I don\'t like incorrect relations.
Also, If I\'m disappointed in my wife, I\'m going to resolve it on the day.
>>> Also, if I\'m disappointed in my wife, I\'m going to resolve it on the day.
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