Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I went valley with family last week.
We ate delicious food there. My daughter and I swam in there.
Many people visited there. but, We enjoyed cool wind and releax.
I would like go there next year too.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Neo!
2. We ate delicious food there. My daughter and I swam in there.
3. Many people visited there. but, We enjoyed cool wind and releax.
4. I would like go there next year too.
Thank you for answering your homework. I hope you have a good rest!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes to remember:
1. I went valley with family last week.
>>I went to the valley with my family last week.
2. We ate delicious food there. My daughter and I swam in there.
>>We ate delicious food there, and my daughter and I swam in (the river).
3. Many people visited there. but, We enjoyed cool wind and releax.
>>Many people like us visited the place to enjoy the cool wind and to relax.
4. I would like go there next year too.
>>I would like go there next year, too.
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