Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
[Writing Task] If you were a fashion item (hat, belt, scarf, etc.), what would you be and why?
I was a shoes. I think that shoes is fashion more than convenience.
I like convenience shoes for foot. Even if shoes are really pretty, my feet should be comfortable.
and shoes color is normally. I don\'t like the colorful.. I like color grey, black, white.
I think that the end of fashion is normal, plain, ordinary..
There is a Korean saying that the completion of fashion is the face.
I think that I have my own fashion style.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름] [이름]!
Depending on the demands and tastes of the wearer, fashion items of all sizes can be useful. Smaller accessories like delicate jewelry or tiny purses can be stylish and useful, while larger pieces like statement jewelry or big bags can make a powerful fashion statement. Selecting pieces that go well with one\'s body shape and personal style is crucial.
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I was a shoes. I think that shoes is fashion more than convenience.
>>> I would be a pair of shoes. I think that shoes are more for fashion than convenience.
I like convenience shoes for foot. Even if shoes are really pretty, my feet should be comfortable.
I like convenience shoes for foot. Even if shoes are really pretty, my feet should be comfortable.
>>> I like convenient shoes for my feet. Even if shoes are really pretty, my feet should be comfortable.
and shoes color is normally. I don\'t like the colorful.. I like color grey, black, white.
and shoes color is normally. I don\'t like the colorful.. I like color grey, black, white.
>>> I prefer the shoe color to be normal. I don\'t like colorful ones. I like the colors grey, black, and white.
I think that the end of fashion is normal, plain, ordinary..
I think that the end of fashion is normal, plain, ordinary..
>>> I think that the end of fashion is normal, plain, and ordinary.
There is a Korean saying that the completion of fashion is the face.
There is a Korean saying that the completion of fashion is the face.
>>> CORRECT
I think that I have my own fashion style.
I think that I have my own fashion style.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: I believe I have my unique fashion sense.
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