Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
to, my teacher Divina.
What are some places that you want to visit again?
When I was child, I want to visit again neighborhood with lived my parents & me.
I am busy. so I can\'t go there. honestly It\'s not far from my home.
Maybe If I go there again, I raise many child memory.
I would like to go there again. :)
강사 첨삭
Hi, Neo!
2. I am busy. so I can\'t go there. honestly It\'s not far from my home.
3. Maybe If I go there again, I raise many child memory.
4. I would like to go there again.
Thank you for answering your homework. I hope you have a good rest!
Also, I hope you could get the chance to visit your childhood neighborhood.
It would be fun to remember a lot memories when you were young. :)
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. When I was child, I want to visit again neighborhood with lived my parents & me.
>>I want to visit the neighborhood that I lived with my parents when I was a child.
2. I am busy. so I can\'t go there. honestly It\'s not far from my home.
>>I am very busy so I couldn\'t go there even if it\'s not far from my home.
3. Maybe If I go there again, I raise many child memory.
>>Maybe If I go there again, I would remember a lot of childhood memories.
4. I would like to go there again.
>>CORRECT!
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