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2012-05-22 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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1) Anne will have repaired her bike next week. (to repair) 2) We will have done the washing by 8 o'clock. (to do) 3) She will have visited Paris by the end of next year. (to visit) 4) I will have finished this by 6 o'clock. (to finish) 5) Sam will have left by next week. (to leave) I have a problem to my trip. My comapany have a employee training every Summer vacation. The day of employee training in this year overlap my trip. Oh my god!! I didn't inform my company about my trip and I don't want to inform that. If I inform my company, the situation will be complex. I have a lot manager to report. I have to report my boss (She is manager), the director of a library, the secretary-general and maybe president of univesity. After traveling, I have to give them some presents as a matter of courtesy. So I will not say about my trip.s And I will lie. I didn't yet think what I say.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], thank you so much for making your homework today.. Job well done!! About your trip, I think it will be much better not to inform them;kkkk..^^ Maybe we can talk more about your trip later in our class.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 1) Anne will have repaired her bike next week. (to repair) >>correct2) We will have done the washing by 8 o\'clock. (to do) >>correct3) She will have visited Paris by the end of next year. (to visit) >>correct4) I will have finished this by 6 o\'clock. (to finish) >>correct5) Sam will have left by next week. (to leave)>>correctI have a problem to my trip. >>I have a problem reegarding my trip.My comapany have a employee training every Summer vacation. >>My company has an employee training every Summer vacation.The day of employee training in this year overlap my trip. >>correctOh my god!! >>correctI didn\'t inform my company about my trip and I don\'t want to inform that. >>I didn\'t inform them about my trip and I dont want to infor them as well.If I inform my company, the situation will be complex. >>correctI have a lot manager to report. >>I have a lot of managers to report to.I have to report my boss (She is manager), the director of a library, the secretary-general and maybe president of univesity. >>I have to report to my boss, to the director of the library, the secretary general and maybe even to the president of the university.After traveling, I have to give them some presents as a matter of courtesy. >>correctSo I will not say about my trip.s >>So I wont tell them about my trip.And I will lie. >>correctI didn\'t yet think what I say. >>I havent thought of what to tell them yet.

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