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2025-08-15 · 첨삭 강사 Divina

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I prefer like short ones than one long vacation. Because I have a lot of worry about work. so, When I rest vacation I think always my work. Sometime I would like to long vacation, I might uncomfortalbe my mind. So, I like many times short vacation. Good night. ~S. Neo^^

강사 첨삭

Hi, Neo!

Thank you for doing your homework~

T. Divina^^

Here are some corrections:

1. I prefer like short ones than one long vacation.

>>I prefer having short vacation than long ones.

2. Because I have a lot of worry about work.

>>It\'s because I worry a lot about work.

3. so, When I rest vacation I think always my work.

>>So, when I rest on my vacation, I still think about it.

4. Sometime I would like to long vacation, I might uncomfortalbe my mind.

>>If I go on a long vacation, I might be uncomfortable in my mind.

5. So, I like many times short vacation.

>>So, I like many short vacation trips instead.

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