Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: Is giving always about money or gifts? What else can people give? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentence.
Answer: We can give true heart to people. Because The true heart is present too. So true heart helps our people.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Belle. I appreciate you taking the time to check the homework. You’re starting to write with more confidence, and your ideas are easier to follow. Review one grammar point each week and make example sentences for it. I hope you have a wonderful weekend ahead. See you in the next class. ~Teacher Jane ^_^
We can give true heart to people.
>> We can give love to people.
Because The true heart is present too.
>> Love can also be a gift.
So true heart helps our people.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: Giving love helps other people.
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