Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What are the things that you like to talk about with other people?
I like to talk about others people has same habits with me.
Among them I like movies, hikings.
but, These days I want to talk about health.
maybe, I worry my health. So, I quited somke 2 years ago.
Thank u. ~S. Neo^^
강사 첨삭
Hi, Neo!
2. Among them I like movies, hikings.
3. but, These days I want to talk about health.
4. maybe, I worry my health. So, I quited somke 2 years ago.
Thank you for doing your homework. Have a great night!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. I like to talk about others people has same habits with me.
>>I like to talk about other people who have the same habit as me.
2. Among them I like movies, hikings.
>>Among the topics are movies and hiking.
3. but, These days I want to talk about health.
>>These days, I want to talk about health.
4. maybe, I worry my health. So, I quited somke 2 years ago.
>>I am worried about my health, so I quit smoking 2 years ago.
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