homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi,
Thanks for sharing your travel experiences.
-Teacher Ash
I want to go to Paris, Italy, swiss.
>> I want to go to Paris, Italy, and Switzerland.
I hope to Europe.
>> I hope to go back to Europe someday.
when we have a honeymoon, we went a east europe. Czech Republic, Austria, Hungary…
>> When we had our honeymoon, we went to Eastern Europe: the Czech Republic, Austria, and Hungary.
Then we had a experience. a various culture, beautiful night view and beautiful ochestra, history of country..
>> We experienced various cultures, enjoyed the beautiful view at night, listened to the orchestra, and learn some of their history.
I almost important think is new experiences. various try or new place.
>> I always want to experience new things when I travel.
I often need take a rest. so I like to travel on myself.
>> It’s a way for me to take a rest, so I like to travel alone.
forexample, I enjoy simple drive and I find beautiful place and I go to a cafe.
>>For example, I enjoy going for a short drive and looking for a beautiful place to stay, such as a cafe.
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