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2025-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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What is the best place for a vacation in your country? Why is it good? What\'s more important to you when you travel - comfort and relaxation, or new experiences? I want to go to Paris, Italy, swiss. I hope to Europe. when we have a honeymoon, we went a east europe. Czech Republic, Austria, Hungary... Then we had a experience. a various culture, beautiful night view and beautiful ochestra, history of country.. I almost important think is new experiences. various try or new place. I often need take a rest. so I like to travel on myself. forexample, I enjoy simple drive and I find beautiful place and I go to a cafe.

강사 첨삭

Hi, 


Thanks for sharing your travel experiences. 


-Teacher Ash


I want to go to Paris, Italy, swiss. 

>> I want to go to Paris, Italy, and Switzerland. 


I hope to Europe.

>> I hope to go back to Europe someday. 


when we have a honeymoon, we went a east europe. Czech Republic, Austria, Hungary…

>> When we had our honeymoon, we went to Eastern Europe: the Czech Republic, Austria, and Hungary.


Then we had a experience. a various culture, beautiful night view and beautiful ochestra, history of country..

>> We experienced various cultures, enjoyed the beautiful view at night, listened to the orchestra, and learn some of their history. 


I almost important think is new experiences. various try or new place.

>> I always want to experience new things when I travel. 

 

I often need take a rest. so I like to travel on myself.

>> It’s a way for me to take a rest, so I like to travel alone. 


forexample, I enjoy simple drive and I find beautiful place and I go to a cafe.

>>For example, I enjoy going for a short drive and looking for a beautiful place to stay, such as a cafe.


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