Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: What does it mean to be a good friend? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: Good friends mean who listen my trouble. Because It is hard to overcome myself. So It is good to share a trouble with my friend.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Belle. You are learning to write in English step by step. You can already write simple sentences. Right now, your sentences are short, but that’s okay. The next step is to join sentences together with words like and, but, or because. This will help your writing become longer and more interesting. Overall, you are doing well. Little by little, your writing will get stronger. Keep it up! ~Teacher Jane c\",)
Good friends mean who listen my trouble.
>> Good friends are those who listen to my troubles.
Because It is hard to overcome myself.
>> Because it is hard to overcome them by myself.
So It is good to share a trouble with my friend.
>> So it is good to share my troubles with my friend.
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