Homework
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What do you usually order online?
Theseday grocery store able to order online.
So, we usually order a lot foods.
Sometimes we recive bad foods. but, we still use it.
Because, oder online is very convenient.
Good night. ~S. Neo^^
강사 첨삭
Hi, Neo!
2. So, we usually order a lot foods.
3. Sometimes we recive bad foods. but, we still use it.
4. Because, oder online is very convenient.
Thank you for your diligence in doing your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. Theseday grocery store able to order online.
>>These days, grocery items are available online.
2. So, we usually order a lot foods.
>>So, we usually order a lot of food.
3. Sometimes we recive bad foods. but, we still use it.
>>Sometimes we receive bad food but we still consume it.
4. Because, oder online is very convenient.
>>Ordering online is very convenient.
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