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2025-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Divina

학생이 쓴 원문

What are some things that you want to learn in the future? Why? I am tired, so I won\'t to learn other things. If I can only just one choice.. I want try to study English. I think my good chance was to met you thought Power English. I will sleep your recommand song. Thank u. ~S. Neo^^

강사 첨삭

Hello, Neo! 

Thank you for doing your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some corrections:

1. I am tired, so I won\'t to learn other things.
>>I am tired, so I won\'t learn other things.

2. If I can only just one choice.. I want try to study English.
>>Though if I have one choice, it would be to learn English.

3. I think my good chance was to met you thought Power English.
>>I had a good chance when I met you through Power English.

4. I will sleep your recommand song.
>>I will sleep while listening to your recommended song.

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