homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Thank you, teacher. Here is my answer. It can't be helped. If human be used for scientific research, It is shocking and horrendous tragedy.
강사 첨삭
Hi! Thank you for giving me your opinion. It is nice to know that you have a position about this issue. Anyway, see you in class and check my correction below. Take care! ^^
T.LORRAINE
Thank you, teacher.
>>Correct!
Here is my answer. It can\'t be helped.
>>Here is my answer, I think it can\'t help.
If human be used for scientific research, It is shocking and horrendous tragedy.
>>If humans are going to be used for scientific research, it will be a horrendous tragedy.
>>Note: Shocking and horrendous are the same.
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