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2025-08-23 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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Do you find time to relax during a business trip? What do you do to relax? Have you had some unexpected or strange experience in one of your business trips? [respond] yes, I relax to only after dinner time. I eat a delicious dinner and watch a TV in hotel. I have a running time for relax. and I walk a view at business trip place. I don\'t have strange experience. but I have been annoyed that didn\'t resolve work. I worried business trip. because things may not be expected. forexample there could be a network fail..

강사 첨삭

Hi,

Thanks for responding to the questions.
-Teacher Ash

yes, I relax to only after dinner time.
>> I can only relax after dinner.

I eat a delicious dinner and watch a TV in hotel.
>> I eat delicious food and watch TV in my hotel room.

I have a running time for relax.
>> I have plenty of time to relax.

and I walk a view at business trip place.
>>I also watch the scenery from my hotel window.

I don\'t have strange experience.
>> I don\'t have any strange experience.

but I have been annoyed that didn\'t resolve work.
>> I am just annoyed when I could not find solution to the problems during my business trip.

I worried business trip. because things may not be expected. forexample there could be a network fail..
>> I am worried that things may not go as I expected especially network failure.

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