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2012-05-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Today my school teacher and school friends is play sports. Sports game is soccer i am defenser i am attack goalkipper. I have 2 points our time is win. we have 2 points their time is 0 poins. Today is very funny days

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Hi [이름] [이름] ^_^ Thank you for sending me your composition.Congratulations! I\'m so proud of you because you did a lot of things for your team ^-^ Keep it up!Continue being a good student and also a good player. You can express your ideas,we just have to polish your grammar. Just be confident during our class. Take Care! See you again! T.Nina Today my school teacher and school friends is play sports. >>Today,my school teacher and my friends played sports.Sports game is soccer i am defenser i am attack goalkipper. >>The sports game was soccer and I am did all of the attack and the defense.I am also the goal keeper.I have 2 points our time is win. >>I had 2 points and our team won.we have 2 points their time is 0 poins. >>We had two points and for the other team thay had no score.Today is very funny days >>Today was a fun day.

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