Homework
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What are the disadvantages of eating fast food often?
I think the fast food is too high calorie. so, it is not health food.
and, when I eat the food I can\'t digestion a few hours.
but, I think If I don\'t have time I order this food easy.
Anyway, Today I had hamburger for dinner. It was very delicious.
Thank u Divina^^.
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Hi, Neo!
2. and, when I eat the food I can\'t digestion a few hours.
3. but, I think If I don\'t have time I order this food easy.
4. Anyway, Today I had hamburger for dinner. It was very delicious.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think the fast food is too high calorie. so, it is not health food.
>>I think fast food is too high in calories, so it is not healthy food.
2. and, when I eat the food I can\'t digestion a few hours.
>>And when I eat that food, I can\'t digest it for a few hours.
3. but, I think If I don\'t have time I order this food easy.
>>But I think if I don\'t have time, it\'s easy to order this food.
4. Anyway, Today I had hamburger for dinner. It was very delicious.
>>Anyway, today I had a hamburger for dinner. It was very delicious.
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