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2025-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Shay

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Shay, I need to change today\'s class time. Because our master in internship called me earlier today all of a sudden. So I changed class time later, but I don\'t have confidence to arrive at my house at that time. If I can\'t depart 1 hour before the class, I will cancel the class. I hope we can have the class. I definitely prefer the latter. Because I originally don\'t like strong accent. I\'m a bit sensitive and self-conscious person, so I need courage to ask for advice to others.But if they said too strong, I would feel like I loss confidence.I always try to give soft advice whenever I am asked.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
Yes, indeed, a gentle advice is more reasonable.
I hope to see you in class.
If you really need to cancel, it\'s okay.
I understand.
_T. SHAY^^
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I definitely prefer the latter. Because I originally don\'t like strong accent.

>>I definitely prefer the latter because I don\'t like it when people speak with a strong intonation.
OR: I definitely prefer the latter because I dislike it when advice is given in a forceful tone.

I\'m a bit sensitive and self-conscious person, so I need courage to ask for advice to others.

>>I\'m a bit sensitive and self-conscious person, so I need courage to ask others for advice.

OR: Since I\'m a rather sensitive and self-conscious person, I need a bit of courage to ask others for advice.
But if they said too strong, I would feel like I loss confidence.

>>But if they spoke too strongly, I would feel like I lost confidence.

OR: But if they were too direct, I would like I lost confidence.
I always try to give soft advice whenever I am asked.
>>Correct
OR: I always try to offer advice in a considerate way.

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