Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: Do you think digital devices should replace paper and notebooks? Why? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: No I don\'t think so. Because computer can search something and We can watch movie. So It is more comfortable.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Belle. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the topic. Great job! Take note of the corrections below. I hope you have a good night. See you in our next class. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
No I don\'t think so.
>> No, I don\'t think so./ No, I don\'t think digital devices should replace paper and notebooks.
Because computer can search something and We can watch movie.
>> Because computers can search for something while we\'re watching a movie.
So It is more comfortable.
>> So it\'s very comfortable.
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