Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework:
How often do you listen to music?
What song best represents you or your attitude to life?
I often listen to music everyday.
because I go to work by a car. I listen to music in my car
I like a ballad. I like sincere songs.
I actually don\'t put much meaning the word of the song.
I like slowly tempo. and I love song of sad.
especially I like singer. korean singer name is Shin Yong Jae(4 Men), Spider, Lyn, IU, Kim dong Ryul.
This singers sing ballad. This singers very famous in korea.
강사 첨삭
[이름][이름],
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
-Teacher Ash
>> I often listen to music every day.
because I go to work by a car.
>> It\'s because I go to work by car.
I listen to music in my car
>> I listen to music in my car.
I like a ballad.
>> I like ballad music.
I like sincere songs.
>> I like to listen to heartfelt songs.
I actually don\'t put much meaning the word of the song.
>> I don\'t think much about the meaning of the song.
I like slowly tempo.
>> I like the slow tempo.
and I love song of sad.
>> I also love sad songs.
especially I like singer. korean singer name is Shin Yong Jae(4 Men), Spider, Lyn, IU, Kim dong Ryul.
>> I really like Shin Yong Jae of 4 Men, Spider, Lyn, IU, and Kim Dong Ryul.
This singers sing ballad.
>> They sing ballad songs.
This singers very famous in korea.
>> These singers are very famous in Korea.
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