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I prefer to give advice, because it\'s usually when I feel comfortable. I just like those moments that I can freely share my opinion to others. And if my advice helps them, that\'s even better! Of course, I also like receiving advice, but it\'s only good when I ask for it.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
Actually, sometimes both can be overwhelming.
_T. SHAY^^
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I prefer to give advice, because it\'s usually when I feel comfortable.
Thank you for sharing.
Actually, sometimes both can be overwhelming.
_T. SHAY^^
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I prefer to give advice, because it\'s usually when I feel comfortable.
>>Correct
OR: I feel more comfortable when giving advice.
OR: I feel more comfortable when giving advice.
I just like those moments that I can freely share my opinion to others.
>>Correct
OR: I enjoy being able to openly share my opinions with others.
OR: I enjoy being able to openly share my opinions with others.
And if my advice helps them, that\'s even better!
>>Correct
OR: It\'s even more satisfying when my advice actually makes a difference.
OR: It\'s even more satisfying when my advice actually makes a difference.
Of course, I also like receiving advice, but it\'s only good when I ask for it.
>>Correct
OR: I do enjoy receiving advice, but it\'s only helpful if I ask for it.
OR: I do enjoy receiving advice, but it\'s only helpful if I ask for it.
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