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2025-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Shay

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Yes,I like going to new restaurants, but I don’t really like experiencing new dishes. Because I hate eating bad dishes. I am really annoyed when it is bad, if I try the new dish. I just order a familiar dish at a new restaurant. Sometimes I want to try a new one, then I read the explanation of the menu carefully. And I imagine the taste and mix of ingredient. It makes me reduce experiencing fails.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
I\'m kinda like that too, so I usually end up ordering the same food and drinks.
_T. SHAY^^
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Yes,I like going to new restaurants, but I don’t really like experiencing new dishes. 
>>Correct
OR: I enjoy exploring new restaurants; however, I tend to avoid unfamiliar dishes.
Because I hate eating bad dishes. 
>>It\'s because I hate eating bad dishes.
OR: I dislike eating poorly prepared food.
I am really annoyed when it is bad, if I try the new dish. 
>>I get really annoyed if I try a new dish and it turns out bad.
OR: I become quite frustrated if I try a new dish and it doesn\'t taste good.
I just order a familiar dish at a new restaurant. 
>>Correct
OR: I usually stick to familiar dishes at new restaurants.
Sometimes I want to try a new one, then I read the explanation of the menu carefully. 
>>Sometimes I want to try a new one, so I read the menu description carefully. 
OR: When I\'m tempted to try a new dish, I always check the menu description first.
And I imagine the taste and mix of ingredient. 
>>And I imagine the taste and how the ingredients will go together.
It makes me reduce experiencing fails.
>>It helps me avoid failing when I try something new.

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