Homework
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What is more important in a restaurant: food, service, or atmosphere?
I think the restaurant best important is food.
If the food is delicious many people come to there.
and If It is bad Service and atmospher they can tolerate too.
only for eat food.
Thank u Divina^^.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Neo!
3. and If It is bad Service and atmospher they can tolerate too.
4. only for eat food.
Thank you for doing your homework!~
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. I think the restaurant best important is food.
>>I think the most important thing about a restaurant is the food.
2. If the food is delicious many people come to there.
>>If the food\'s good, a lot of people will come.
3. and If It is bad Service and atmospher they can tolerate too.
>>People can even tolerate bad service and atmosphere if the food is good.
4. only for eat food.
>>They come only to eat the food.
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