Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: Do you think school should only teach facts, or should it also teach us how to be good people? Why? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: I think school teaches about to be a good person. Because Going school is learning. So our school teaches many things.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Belle. You are making good progress in your writing. I can see that you try hard to express your ideas in English. You can write simple sentences correctly. Keep practicing and don’t be afraid to make mistakes -- mistakes help you learn. Well done, keep going! ~Teacher Jane :)
I think school teaches about to be a good person.
>> OR: I think school teaches how to be a good person.
Because Going school is learning.
>> Because learning is part of going to school.
So our school teaches many things.
>> CORRECT
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