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I good things is play with lago ,play piano and make clay
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sophia!^^
Yes, having a hobby benefits both mental and physical health by lowering stress, increasing well-being, and instilling a feeling of purpose and satisfaction.
Hobbies provide a sense of control, allow for self-expression and social interaction, and can improve cognitive function.
Participating in a selected activity on a regular basis can improve life satisfaction, reduce depressive symptoms, and even have beneficial effects on the body\'s biological systems, which can reduce the risk of developing certain diseases.
See you later.^^ Have a good night!
__T. Mayleen :)
I good things is play with lago ,play piano and make clay
>>> The things I am good at are playing with Lego blocks, playing the piano, and making clay figures.
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