Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. You boil water, but It will evaporate.
2. I get up in the morning. And I first brush my teeth.
3. He is quite famous but He is very modest.
4. The police arrived and They found out but The burglar had disappeared.
5. You are not careful if You will slip and fall.
6. He was not admitted because He was underage.
7. You will get it if You ask for it.
8. I told you not to do it but You have done it again.
9. You can’t go wrong if You follow my instructions.
10. The teacher entered the classroom as soon as The students got up.
강사 첨삭
Hello Eva!!!
I encourage you to to assess yourself and set up your goals, these goals are ownership or your learnings. So start setting up your goals if life and especially in setting up your goals in learning English these are your treasures. I can see you your potentials in speaking keep it up.!!!!
T. Jeny
>>correct
OR>>If you boil water, it will evaporate.
2. I get up in the morning. And I first brush my teeth.
2. I get up in the morning. And I first brush my teeth.
>>When I get up in the morning, I first brush my teeth.
3. He is quite famous but He is very modest.
3. He is quite famous but He is very modest.
>>correct
OR>>Though he is quite famous, he is very modest.
4. The police arrived and They found out but The burglar had disappeared.
4. The police arrived and They found out but The burglar had disappeared.
>>correct
OR>>When the police arrived, they found out that the burglar had disappeared.
5. You are not careful if You will slip and fall.
5. You are not careful if You will slip and fall.
>>correct
OR>>If you are not careful, you will slip and fall.
6. He was not admitted because He was underage.
6. He was not admitted because He was underage.
>>correct
7. You will get it if You ask for it.
7. You will get it if You ask for it.
>>correct
OR>>If you ask for it, you will get it.
8. I told you not to do it but You have done it again.
8. I told you not to do it but You have done it again.
>>correct
OR>>
9. You can’t go wrong if You follow my instructions.
9. You can’t go wrong if You follow my instructions.
>>correctThough I told you not to do it, you have done it again.
10. The teacher entered the classroom as soon as The students got up.
10. The teacher entered the classroom as soon as The students got up.
>>correct
OR>>When the teacher entered the classroom, the students got up.
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