Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What are some things that you do for fun?
When I ride bicycle I feel for fun.
so, I planning to ride bicycle travel this year end.
4 years ago, I have rided bicycle travel to Pusan alone.
This time I want to go Seoul by bicyle.
Thank u Divina^^.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Neo!
2. so, I planning to ride bicycle travel this year end.
3. 4 years ago, I have rided bicycle travel to Pusan alone.
4. This time I want to go Seoul by bicyle.
Thank you for doing your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. When I ride bicycle I feel for fun.
>>When I ride my bicycle, I feel like I\'m having fun.
2. so, I planning to ride bicycle travel this year end.
>>So, I\'m planning to go on a bicycle trip at the end of this year.
3. 4 years ago, I have rided bicycle travel to Pusan alone.
>>Four years ago, I went on a solo bicycle trip to Busan.
4. This time I want to go Seoul by bicyle.
>>This time, I want to go to Seoul by bicycle.
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