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It\'s a really hard question to answer. Hmm.. I love both of them, they are just good in a different way, but I prefer one big accomplishment a little bit more. Since I\'ve focused on one part and worked hard for a long time to make a big accomplishment, the moment that I achieve it is more impressive than smaller one. But I also enjoy catching my small accomplishment. It helps me be more confident.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
You\'re right. Both are beneficial.
_T. SHAY^^
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It\'s a really hard question to answer.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
You\'re right. Both are beneficial.
_T. SHAY^^
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It\'s a really hard question to answer.
>>Correct
OR: It\'s hard to choose one.
Hmm.. I love both of them, they are just good in a different way, but I prefer one big accomplishment a little bit more. >>Hmm.. I love both of them. They are both good in a different way, but I prefer one big accomplishment a little bit more.
OR: It\'s hard to choose one.
Hmm.. I love both of them, they are just good in a different way, but I prefer one big accomplishment a little bit more. >>Hmm.. I love both of them. They are both good in a different way, but I prefer one big accomplishment a little bit more.
OR: I appreciate both, but I lean slightly toward one big accomplishment.
Since I\'ve focused on one part and worked hard for a long time to make a big accomplishment, the moment that I achieve it is more impressive than smaller one.
Since I\'ve focused on one part and worked hard for a long time to make a big accomplishment, the moment that I achieve it is more impressive than smaller one.
>>Since I\'ve focused on one area and worked hard for a long time to make a big accomplishment, the moment I achieve feels more impressive than smaller ones.
OR: After working hard for so long on a single goal, the moment I achieve it is much more impressive than achieving smaller ones.
But I also enjoy catching my small accomplishment.
But I also enjoy catching my small accomplishment.
>>But I also enjoy catching my small accomplishments.
OR: I also find joy in my smaller accomplishments.
It helps me be more confident.
>>Correct
OR: It boosts my confidence.
It helps me be more confident.
>>Correct
OR: It boosts my confidence.
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