Homework
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What kind of activities give you healing?
When I sometimes exhausted about work I go to hiking on the weekend.
I feel healing when I go to top of the mountain.
and I like listen to the music and I got some fresh air there.
so, I\'m going to hiking with friend on this weekend.
Thank u Divina^^.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Neo!
2. I feel healing when I go to top of the mountain.
3. and I like listen to the music and I got some fresh air there.
4. so, I\'m going to hiking with friend on this weekend.
Thank you for doing your homework. I hope you get a lot of healing~!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. When I sometimes exhausted about work I go to hiking on the weekend.
>>When I feel exhausted from work, I sometimes go hiking on the weekend.
2. I feel healing when I go to top of the mountain.
>>I feel healed when I reach the top of the mountain.
3. and I like listen to the music and I got some fresh air there.
>>I also like listening to music and getting some fresh air there.
4. so, I\'m going to hiking with friend on this weekend.
>>So, I\'m going hiking with a friend this weekend.
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