homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: Can you think of a time when hard work gave you a good result or opportunity? What happened? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: If we do hard work, It gives to me a good result. It happened when I get a good score. So the hard work gives a good result.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Belle. I appreciate that you are making an effort in your English writing. You can write simple sentences with the right word order. You show effort and motivation when completing writing tasks. Keep practicing step by step, and your writing will become stronger and clearer. Have a good night! ~Teacher Jane c\",)
If we do hard work, It gives to me a good result.
>> If we work hard, it gives me a good result.
It happened when I get a good score.
>> It happened when I got a good score.
So the hard work gives a good result.
>> So hard work gives good results.
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