Homework
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Have you tried paying a fine before? How did it happen?
Sure. I have payed a speed fine 2 years ago.
I drove a car with family for eat out lunch.
I didn\'t see speed camera. so, I drove high speed.
when we receved fine my wife told me.
You are carefuly drive car.
I upseted and I regret it. but, I can\'t help it.
I had to payed a fine.
Thank u Divina^^.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Neo!
2. I drove a car with family for eat out lunch.
3. I didn\'t see speed camera. so, I drove high speed.
4. when we receved fine my wife told me.
5. You are carefuly drive car.
6. I upseted and I regret it. but, I can\'t help it.
7. I had to payed a fine.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. Sure. I have payed a speed fine 2 years ago.
>>Sure. I paid a speeding fine two years ago.
2. I drove a car with family for eat out lunch.
>>I was driving with my family to go out for lunch.
3. I didn\'t see speed camera. so, I drove high speed.
>>I didn’t see the speed camera, so I was driving too fast.
4. when we receved fine my wife told me.
>>When we received the fine, my wife told me about it.
5. You are carefuly drive car.
>>She said, “You need to drive more carefully.”
6. I upseted and I regret it. but, I can\'t help it.
>>I was upset and regretted it, but I couldn’t do anything about it.
7. I had to payed a fine.
>>I had to pay the fine.
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