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Actually, in the past, a café was simply a place to drink coffee and chat. But these days, the word “café” should rather be thought of as a place. In Korea, a wide variety of cafés have appeared. For example, a study café is a space where people can study, which doesn’t actually sell drinks but only provides a place. A comic café is a place to read comics, and a board game café is a place to play board games. In this way, the meaning of “café” has expanded beyond just drinking coffee, and now it broadly refers to a place where you can do a certain activity.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
Your country really has a wide variety of cafes.
_T. SHAY^^
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Actually, in the past, a cafe was simply a place to drink coffee and chat.
Thank you for sharing.
Your country really has a wide variety of cafes.
_T. SHAY^^
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Actually, in the past, a cafe was simply a place to drink coffee and chat.
>>Correct
OR: In the old days, cafes were only about coffee and conversation.
But these days, the word “cafe” should rather be thought of as a place.
OR: In the old days, cafes were only about coffee and conversation.
But these days, the word “cafe” should rather be thought of as a place.
>>But these days, the word “cafe” is better understood as a place.
In Korea, a wide variety of cafes have appeared.
In Korea, a wide variety of cafes have appeared.
>>Correct
OR: Korea has seen the emergence of a wide variety of cafes.
For example, a study cafe is a space where people can study, which doesn’t actually sell drinks but only provides a place. >>For example, a study cafe is a space where people can study; it doesn’t actually sell drinks but only provides a place.
A comic cafe is a place to read comics, and a board game cafe is a place to play board games.
OR: Korea has seen the emergence of a wide variety of cafes.
For example, a study cafe is a space where people can study, which doesn’t actually sell drinks but only provides a place. >>For example, a study cafe is a space where people can study; it doesn’t actually sell drinks but only provides a place.
A comic cafe is a place to read comics, and a board game cafe is a place to play board games.
>>Correct
OR: A comic cafe is for reading comics, while a board game cafe is for playing board games.
In this way, the meaning of “cafe” has expanded beyond just drinking coffee, and now it broadly refers to a place where you can do a certain activity.
>>Correct
OR: Thus, the concept of a cafe has evolved from being solely about coffee to encompassing places dedicated to various activities.
OR: A comic cafe is for reading comics, while a board game cafe is for playing board games.
In this way, the meaning of “cafe” has expanded beyond just drinking coffee, and now it broadly refers to a place where you can do a certain activity.
>>Correct
OR: Thus, the concept of a cafe has evolved from being solely about coffee to encompassing places dedicated to various activities.
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