Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: Why can’t we change something before we accept it? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: No. We can change the something. Because changing is my mid and It is my opinion.
강사 첨삭
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No.
>> No, we can\'t change something before we accept it.
We can change the something.
>> We can change some things.
Because changing is my mid and It is my opinion.
>> Because changing is my opinion.
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