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I don\'t think cafe make people more dependent on caffeine. When they really need caffeine, then just buy it in anywhere like convenience store or make in their places. Cafes just give a place where we can talk or study.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
That\'s true.
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I don\'t think cafe make people more dependent on caffeine.
Thank you for sharing.
That\'s true.
_T. SHAY^^
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I don\'t think cafe make people more dependent on caffeine.
>>I don\'t think cafes make people more dependent on caffeine.
When they really need caffeine, then just buy it in anywhere like convenience store or make in their places.
When they really need caffeine, then just buy it in anywhere like convenience store or make in their places.
>>When they really need caffeine, they can just buy it at any convenience store or make it at home.
Cafes just give a place where we can talk or study.
>>Cafes just provide a place where we can talk or study.
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