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When do you usually spend a big amount of money?
When my daughter got birthday I sometimes spend a big money.
She doen\'t want to get gift anyting. so, I give the big money to her.
but, She only save the money. Because, She will be college student next year.
Maybe she want to saves the money for that time.
Thank u. Enjoy weekend. :)
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Hi, Neo!
2. She doen\'t want to get gift anyting. so, I give the big money to her.
3. but, She only save the money. Because, She will be college student next year.
4. Maybe she want to saves the money for that time.
Thank you for doing your homework. Enjoy your weekend!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. When my daughter got birthday I sometimes spend a big money.
>>When it\'s my daughter\'s birthday, I sometimes spend a lot of money.
2. She doen\'t want to get gift anyting. so, I give the big money to her.
>>She doesn’t want to receive any gifts, so I give her money instead.
3. but, She only save the money. Because, She will be college student next year.
>>But she just saves the money because she\'ll be a college student next year.
4. Maybe she want to saves the money for that time.
>>Maybe she wants to save the money for that time.
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