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When I feel like it\'s just a light symptom like a cold or diarrhea, I simply want to get a medicine fast. But if I don\'t know why I have these symptoms, I feel anxious and a little bit scared. I visited the doctor recently, because I had some pimples. Actually, they aren\'t just pimples, they are steatocystomas. It\'s more expensive to remove them than pimples. I was worried that the steatocystomas might have developed because I wasn’t cleansing well. But the doctor said it didn’t matter at all.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
Indeed, if it\'s not a common symptom, it usually makes us worried.
_T. SHAY^^
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When I feel like it\'s just a light symptom like a cold or diarrhea, I simply want to get a medicine fast.
Thank you for sharing.
Indeed, if it\'s not a common symptom, it usually makes us worried.
_T. SHAY^^
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When I feel like it\'s just a light symptom like a cold or diarrhea, I simply want to get a medicine fast.
>>When I feel like it\'s just a light symptom, like a cold or diarrhea, I simply want to get medicine fast.
But if I don\'t know why I have these symptoms, I feel anxious and a little bit scared.
But if I don\'t know why I have these symptoms, I feel anxious and a little bit scared.
>>Correct
OR: However, if I cannot determine the source of these symptoms, I become anxious and slightly afraid.
I visited the doctor recently, because I had some pimples.
OR: However, if I cannot determine the source of these symptoms, I become anxious and slightly afraid.
I visited the doctor recently, because I had some pimples.
>>I visited a doctor recently because I had some pimples.
OR: I consulted a doctor recently due to having pimples.
Actually, they aren\'t just pimples, they are steatocystomas.
>>Actually, they aren\'t just pimples; they are steatocystomas.
OR: Upon examination, they were found not to be ordinary pimples, but steatocystomas.
It\'s more expensive to remove them than pimples.
>>Correct
OR: Removing them costs more than removing pimples.
I was worried that the steatocystomas might have developed because I wasn’t cleansing well.
OR: Removing them costs more than removing pimples.
I was worried that the steatocystomas might have developed because I wasn’t cleansing well.
>>I was worried that the steatocystomas might have developed because I wasn’t cleansing my skin well.
OR: I was worried that they might have resulted from inadequate cleansing habits.
But the doctor said it didn’t matter at all.
OR: I was worried that they might have resulted from inadequate cleansing habits.
But the doctor said it didn’t matter at all.
>>Correct
OR: However, the doctor assured me that it wasn\'t the reason.
OR: However, the doctor assured me that it wasn\'t the reason.
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