homework
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Children usually love sweet foods. Would\' you allow your child to eat sweets? How important is the food that children eat? Does it have to be healthy?
I don\'t think so.
Sometimes I think that need to eat sweets.
because sweets things is good for concentration.
sure, Too much is harmful
I think that I want to tell you everything about what children love.
강사 첨삭
[이름] [이름],
Sometimes I think that need to eat sweets.
because sweets things is good for concentration.
sure, Too much is harmful
I think that I want to tell you everything about what children love.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
-Teacher Ash
I don\'t think so.
>> CORRECT!
Sometimes I think that need to eat sweets.
>> I think children need to eat sweets at times.
because sweets things is good for concentration.
>> It is because sweet is good for concentration.
sure, Too much is harmful
>> However, too much sweet is harmful.
I think that I want to tell you everything about what children love.
>> I can share about what children likes to eat in our discussion.
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