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How does it feel to meet new people?
In my case, It feel different what kind of case.
If fun case is my mind good, bad case I am nervous.
Anyway, I think new people meet always excited.
Good night, Divina :)
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Hi, Neo!
2. If fun case is my mind good, bad case I am nervous.
3. Anyway, I think new people meet always excited.
Thank you for doing your homework~
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. In my case, It feel different what kind of case.
>>In my case, it feels different depending on the kind of case.
2. If fun case is my mind good, bad case I am nervous.
>>If the case is fun, my mind feels good, but if the case is bad, I get nervous.
3. Anyway, I think new people meet always excited.
>>Anyway, I think meeting new people is always exciting.
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