homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) Peggy will be coming to the party on Saturday.
2) We will be meeting him tomorrow.
3) This time next week he will bo flying to South Africa.
4) At 6 o'clock on Friday they will be singing the new song.
5) It will be rainging when I reach Bangkok.
My friend Hyo-Jung has a baby.
The baby was born on 1st of January this year.
He is just 6 months old.
When we met to go housewarming, she took her baby.
He is very small and short.
I couldn't touch him. He seemed to be broken.
I was afraid of hurting the baby.
When I hestated to hug him, his mother pick up him and put him in my breast.
The baby wriggled in my breast. He rubbed his face on my breast and dribbled in my shirts.
Oh my god. He was very cute.
I love a baby by nature. I love more him.
I miss him now. Most of my friends miss him.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name],
Thank you so much for making a great job in answering your homework..:)
Hmmm, about your composition my dear Miss. [Name], I think its about time that you will have your own baby too,kkkk,kidding..
We\'ll talk more about this later in our class..
Take care always Miss. [Name]..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
1) Peggy will be coming to the party on Saturday.
>>correct2) We will be meeting him tomorrow.
>>correct3) This time next week he will bo flying to South Africa.
>>correct4) At 6 o\'clock on Friday they will be singing the new song.
>>correct5) It will be rainging when I reach Bangkok.
>>correctMy friend Hyo-Jung has a baby.
>>correct
>>My friend already has a baby.The baby was born on 1st of January this year.
>>correctHe is just 6 months old.
>>correctWhen we met to go housewarming, she took her baby.
>>correctHe is very small and short.
>>correctI couldn\'t touch him.
>>correct
He seemed to be broken.
>>He seemed so fragile.I was afraid of hurting the baby.
>>correctWhen I hestated to hug him, his mother pick up him and put him in my breast.
>>When I hesitated to hug him, his mother will pick him up and put him close to me.
>>Its okay to use breast but it will be much better to use close to me..^^The baby wriggled in my breast.
>>The baby wiggled close to me.
He rubbed his face on my breast and dribbled in my shirts.
>>correctOh my god. He was very cute.
>>correctI love a baby by nature.
>>correct
I love more him.
>>I love him more.I miss him now. Most of my friends miss him.
>>correct
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